Sisters laughing,

Playing together,

Ring around the roses,

In the

Nearing of summer,

Gladiolus growing in the field.

-Sarah age 11

This poem captures a cheerful and playful atmosphere that is often associated with spring. The image of sisters laughing and playing together evokes a sense of joy and togetherness. The reference to “Ring around the roses” adds a nostalgic touch and reminds us of childhood memories. The mention of Gladiolus growing in the field is a lovely detail that evokes the beauty and renewal of nature, Gladiolus, however, blooms in July and August. Glory-of-the-snow grows in the spring. To make it indicative of spring you would want to change the flower.

However, the poem could benefit from some additional descriptive language and more vivid imagery to fully capture the essence of spring. The use of short, simple phrases makes the poem feel somewhat incomplete and lacking in depth. It would also be interesting to see more exploration of the emotions and themes associated with spring, such as new beginnings, growth, and renewal.

Overall, the poem captures the general feeling of spring but could be further developed with more detailed and evocative language. It is a great example of an acrostic poem. I hope you will continue with all of the other seasons.

David Alexander-Ian Salie

Sisters laughing, carefree and light,

They dance in the field, under the sun,

Playing together, in games of old,

Their bond is unbreakable, a beautiful sight.

Their sisterly love, in unison.

A treasure of memories, ever so bold.

With each passing day, their bond grows strong,

Ring around the roses, they dance and spin,

in the midst of summer’s splendor,

A melody of laughter, a joyful song.

A joyous celebration, full of a grin.

Their bond only grows more tender.

With gladiolus blooming tall and proud,

In the heat of summer, a promise abounds,

Gladiolus growing in the field,

Their sisterhood stands out in a crowd.

The season of growth, fertile grounds.

Vibrant colors, a magnificent yield.

Their laughter, like a gentle breeze,

A symbol of strength, a flower of pride,

As they play, their joy knows no bounds,

Fills the fields, the trees, and the seas.

A reflection of sisters, side by side.

Their love for each, a treasure found.

Sisters laughing, playing together,

Their laughter echoes through the air,

Their love for each other, Ring around the roses,

Their bond is so strong, it will last forever.

A reminder of a love so rare.

forever prosperous in the field of gladiolus.

-David