Transmission as part of the poem
Sondheim wrote through mailing lists, preserving subject lines as titles and allowing messages to enter an active social environment. The poem was not simply composed privately and later uploaded. Its sending, reception, repetition, objections, and interruptions formed part of the work. The Electronic Literature Organization describes Internet Text as a continuous project produced through email lists, computer-mediated communication, programs, and online protocols.
A poet can reproduce this technique using the visible forms of digital communication:
From: breath@body.net
To: nobody@offline
Subject: RE: RE: last words
Date: after the connection failed
I sent the same silence again.
Headers, timestamps, forwarded text, reply marks, bounced messages, spam warnings, and delivery notices can all become formal elements.
A poem might unfold as a sequence of failed emails:
Message sent.
Message delayed.
Message rejected.
Recipient does not exist.
The communication system then becomes a metaphor for relationships, death, exclusion, or longing.
The Message
From: breath@body.net
To: nobody@offline
Subject: RE: RE: last words
Date: after the connection failed
I sent silence
Message sent.
Message delayed.
Message rejected.
I sent the same silence again.
Recipient does not exist.
I sent myself
Message retained in memory.

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